Editing and Proofreading Examples

Many clients ask us, “How much can your editors improve the accuracy and readability of my work?”

The best way to answer that question is to take a look at the genuine "Before and After" examples below.

Each example has 3 parts:

"Before" Document	The original document as submitted by the client.
"After" Document	The completely edited version sent back to the client.
Critique Document	A critique letter from the editor and a "tracked changes" version of your document.

All files are Adobe Acrobat PDF scans of the original MS Word documents. You'll need Adobe Reader (Free) to view the files.

Document	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Thesis - Company Review	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Thesis - Mate Preferences	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Occupational Health	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Buddhist Meditation	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Product Lifecycle	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Bicycle Wheel	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Obsessive Compulsive Disorder	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Nursing	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Russian Racism	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Essay - Japanese Tattoo	Before	After	Critique & Changes
Legal Brief	Before	After	Critique & Changes

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